If an editor felt that a particular bit of dialogue was out of character or sounded wrong, sure they would.
But what sounds wrong to you for a given character may sound perfectly fine to me. And vice versa.
Plus, characters grow and change and evolve over time, and that includes the manner in which they speak. On a certain level, it seems wrong for the Thing that Stan and Jack created to talk about MP3 players or touch-screen smartphones, but on the other hand, in 2015, how can he not?
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